Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Breathing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where are you?
You, who are a halo
around my senses,
a wreath of summer flowers
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James Timothy Jarrett 20 January 2013

Beautiful. The loss and longing pull at the strings of your heart

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Sally P. P. 08 February 2020

Thankyou for your lovely comment, James.

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Sharon Smith 29 June 2012

Just Lovely Sally. Thankyou. Regards...Sharon.

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Annabel Cruz 12 February 2011

love that last line! nice work! A.C.

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Riekairu Calo 09 September 2010

your poem was wonderfully written

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A breath of fresh air, an inspired poem. Thanks for this expiration! D

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nomad omnia 10 February 2010

Perfect. N

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