Breathing Place (Yellow Moon) Comments

WOW! You're a talented poet. Good work.

STARR...YOUR METICULI FOR STRUCTURE COORDINATION IS SO TIGHTLY DISCIPLINED....IMAGEWORX IN POISED POITIONING...GREAT WORK ONCE AGAIN, STARR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

very strongly written and very evocative of the Texan landscape you inhabit.

Starr, I like how you used the moon to symbolize a need to get far away, beyond the reach of everyone... to the perfect breathing place. Well done! ! Brian

A splendid piece! You have a great talent Patricia

I think that Sandra says so much about the way I feel towards this poem, it is very skillfully written also Love Duncan X

A very wistful poem. We all need that breathing place, but perhaps we find it now and then in the creation of a charming piece such as this one. Warm regards, Sandra