Thursday, June 3, 2004

Breathing Machine Comments

Rating: ★4.1

I have a breathing machine
I use it when my lungs are dirty
blocked with soot or feathers
or when there is too much moisture
...
Read full text

Jimi Doyle
breathe snake
COMMENTS
Martin O'Neill 05 March 2012

Jeez Jimi, no-one ever cut me like that one. That one hit a deep deep target.

0 0 Reply
Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 December 2009

Impressive, introspective, and very well written. The thought/idea is an eye opener and cause the reader to reflect, particularly the last lines. 10++++ Cynthia

0 0 Reply
Load More...
Jimi Doyle

Jimi Doyle

Chicago
Jimi Doyle
Jimi Doyle
Chicago
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/27/2025 11:58:33 PM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success