Saturday, November 18, 2017

Breathing In The Season Comments

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Autumn leaves red ochre and sun golden
Gliding from the trees to a breeze
Nearer to a winter so embolden
Makes a shivering soul sneeze and wheeze
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Pasquale DiMeola
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2017

Awesome rhyming n imagery, poetic n lovely to read of. I love to use the word zephyr so I like how u employed it so nicely. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 November 2017

Such a great write, Pasquale.....

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Pasquale DiMeola

Pasquale DiMeola

Newark, New Jersey
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