Thursday, April 13, 2023

Breathe Release Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's easy to overlook this simple act,
To take for granted the breaths we attract.
But in each inhale and exhale we find,
A beauty that cannot be confined.
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Sumita Jetley
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 April 2023

Very beautiful especially the third stanza

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 April 2023

An excellent poem. I quote from your poem, 'For nothing is as beautiful as breath, The source of life, the essence of our quest' I unquote. Top marks

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