Saturday, February 10, 2007

Breathe Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

I want to breathe rain.
Feel the summer mist running through my veins.
I want to ride the clouds.
Soaring free on the edge, high and proud.
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John DeBona
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C.R. Ebowski 11 February 2007

Excellent write...I am very impressed. Keep it up John!

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Carissa Thiessen 10 February 2007

It sounds like there is a lot more behind this poem than it leads people to believe, is there? Really good write though!

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