Thursday, October 9, 2008

Breathe, Oh Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shadow was crying in the front yard
Ringing the bell forcing to come forward
Her eyes is trying to look Heavenward
But the lights were put out by the blizzard.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 October 2008

A nice poem with nice imagery. Love it.10+

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