Breathe Me Comments

Excellent Love Poem...We share a common tread. Love you Uncle Lonnie

I paint you inside my eyes so I can see you all the time- I feel you quiver and release..very good poem.. love, eros, sensations, feelings.. all these you have captured in this poem and depicted it well. thank you dear poet. tony

Soulful write..........Loved the way you depicted each line.

wow....absolutly stunning piece of poetry Lonnie...beautiful....Fi

Beautiful! i give it a perfect 10 :)

superb write......................10! !

so sweet and pure.. I like this a lot.. Nicely written piece