Breathe Every Chance Comments

The mountain will be tough to climb but by working together the task will not be as daunting. Lovely poem of hope Lyn.

For so so long! Positiveness. Don't lose what you have got. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely work! My favorite line: But this can seem Like such a mountain to climb, Piecing together And turning back time. It doesnt just seem like a mountain to climb it is one. But never giving up is always worth while in the end. Great write!

take a breath and let others enjoy what you have to give, for poetry inspires others to live.

Some true expressional abilty, very profound words in each line, greatly pened The_African_Son

Love your title for this beautiful poem, trying to enjoy every moment is the only way forward.in life.