Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Breathe Eternity Comments

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Breathe eternity over me,
With the essence of life
we soar through the heights
of spiritual existance.
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Miss Fairytale
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Tom J. Mariani 28 November 2007

...and that is what this poems does...: 'interlace clarity with mystery' - - it doesn't matter if it is a spiritual force or two real people that are breathing on each other, your poem goes beyond that for me. You add to my definition of what a poem does: 'enterlace clarity with mystery.' Tom

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