Breathe Again Comments

living in expectancy of a life-changing phone-call doesn’t bring order to the chaos surrounding you, so chaos everywhere, wise write

Yes, breathe again...enjoyed this poem.

a poem that makes good sense of how to break free? yes from tyranny! .....................superbly written.

A beautifully conceived meaningful poem and a pleasure to read. Congrats for composing such a nice poem and it's being poem of the Day too.10 points.

unleash suspense, be an angel freed of tyranny leave the mess, hide the phone, breathe again Beautiful poem. Nicely written. 10 for it. Subhas

Very nice! Just what I was looking for.

Be an angel free of tyranny! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.