Breathe Comments

that is what friends and lovers are for to help us breathe... and in the end they make our day easier... good job. Becca

I adore this poem. Breathing is never as simple and habitual as it is made up to be.10/10

I wear your breath on me all day I wonder if they notice I smell different [Orange Geometry]

Vivid and heartfelt with some awesome lines 10++++

You bring welcome light into shattered darkness, illuminating corners so long abandoned. ----------- Great flow of words here. So touching lines with fine imagery! ! !

Well, have enough 'breathe' to chase away those wrong notions, Viola...i liked the powerful message inside you give...10

'I don't need you but I do for a whole other purpose than the obvious! ' Great read... loved it...

I love it! Fools and lovers falling from the same tree! Great turn of phrase. Strange message... I want you here to help me breathe. Whereas...you and your consistently brilliant writing takes my breath away. Your number one fan (but not in a Kathy Bates sort of way! !) Kev. x

Breathtaking, or breathgiving, lovely piece Viola, regards Tom

Absolutly beautiful poetry Viola....you draw the reader into your scene...Fi 10+++

'You keep the pulse of my fantasies and I only want you to help me breathe' I am left breathless its awesome! ! ! ! -10 anjali

Absolute stun of brilliance.. aroha xx

This is another one of your strong works. 'lovers and fools fall from the same tree on dead branches' This image brings to me a big crack. Then as dreams and fantasies merge to me as one, it makes Breathe the best title ever. 10 Karin Anderson