Breathe Comments
When tears run dry, and emotions are high
When I want to smile but I whimper and sigh
When no more tears run across my face
One on one, you confess for now this is all your can take
...
Read full text
powerful poem, especially in the end, longing to be with the one you want even if it means you can no longer breather, great write
wondrous phrases and words. I especially loved your last paragraph, of the choice. It draws us back, emotions...but to not feel it would be doom, too, yes.
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/26/2025 9:44:38 PM # 1.0.0
The last lines are really jam packed with emotions, You are my heart, you are my soul, You are my life's ultimate goal. CP