Sunday, August 17, 2008

Breathe Comments

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Just breathe, through the pain and the tears,
Just breathe even though your heart is breaking.
Breathe even though your sick of your life
And your broken dreams.
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Jacquelyn Ireland
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Bill Thomas 31 October 2008

Valiant spirit, Jacki: your indefatigable resilience is a tonic to this old man on the brink of defeat.

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Chris Newlash 17 August 2008

Loved it, maybe you could read some of my poems, maybe you'll like them!

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