Sunday, June 22, 2008

Breathe Comments

Rating: 4.0

When you know love is ended
you feel a soul unmended
A hole inside deeper
than expected
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Whisper Dawn
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

This poem had an excellant ending. Worthy of any poem. I really wanted to give it a higher score, but I just didn't feel the rest of the poem measured up to the ending. Maybe, it just overshadowed the rest. GW62

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Viola Grey 23 June 2008

'All you want to do is fix it But some things are broke and meant to be that way'..... beautiful lines, full of insight and great understanding...nice work.

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