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Beautiful poem! I love how you express that you need space! Wish more people could understand such things at times. Excellent work!

this poem reminds me of the song 'Leave me alone.. Im Lonely' by Pink.. listen to the lyrics i think you could relate to them.. i like the way youve written this.. i like your style.. very good.. x

Trust bound between us two...... You have to keep the cage door open to make the bird stay. Nice poem Katie. keep on writing.

FOR A BEGINNER, I MUST SAY, THAT YOUR VERSES ARE PRETTY DOWN TO EARTH EVEN ON THIS DAY! KEEP WRITING! -Raj

Nice and sweet poem! ! ! I also love very much short poems talking about love.Love is one of the greatest inspirations for the poet no matter if he feels good or bad, happy or sad.It helps him to rebuid a new world to the poetry where there are only things like 'broken hearts, springs, birds, stars, seas' all of them into a new poetic language. Congratulations - Keep writting +10! ! !

A complete poem in itself, I do love you but you have to let me breathe. CP

Nice feeling poem to let him know you love him, even between families it is the most important thing to say 'I Love You'.....breathe easy regards