Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Breathe Comments

Rating: 3.5

I saw your face, like an angel
And ribbons in your hair;
They burn like fire,
You fly like thunder.
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Mark Andrew Hogg
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Original Unknown Girl 12 May 2008

This is lovely Mark, I really enjoyed the imagery! Just seen that there is another Unknown - perhaps there's more writing in the genes? *just kidding* Good write. HG: -) xx

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Scarlett Treat 09 January 2008

I hear the lovely rythm in this and would love to hear the musical wheelbarrow that carries it along!

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Jennifer Unknown 29 August 2007

This is written beautifully. Nice descriptions too.

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Mark Andrew Hogg

Mark Andrew Hogg

Dumfries/Ayr/Stirling, Scotland
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