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Beneath the water
My drowned eyes long for air
Gasping in prayer
Finished ultra marathon
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Creating positive energy; nice imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this poem wiith us.
Faith at the time of adversity is powerful mantra tonsustain life. Beautifully written.
Thank you for reading and your affirming comment! I look forward to further exchange in the future!
This poem breathes deep faith in The Almighty. Wonderful Bliss about God and all there IS
Faith also is a gift from God breathed into us! He is definitely worthy of all praise! !
Loved it. "drowned eyes' gasping in prayer.. and mountain breathing (life) into the sea… exquisite. Truly poetic way to reiterate the calamitousness of environmental degradation. Top score.
Your prayers were answered , your hard labour bore fruit! A lovely poem!
A labor of faith based on sure promises! Thank you for commenting!
Sincere appreciation! Thank you for stopping by and for kind remarks!
Prayer is lame process to live in dangerous time; self rescuing is the true demand of God.
Thank you for your voice in favor of personal effort and self-discipline! Dangerous time, I agree. Certainly individuals are called to run a race with discipline. However, is not life's race a team event which requires communication and joint effort?
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8/1/2025 10:42:37 PM # 1.0.0
My drowned eyes long for air gasping in prayer.....appreciated the inner meaning and depth of the poetic expression! Top marks