Saturday, December 9, 2017

Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

//Breathe//

My eyes blood shot
Smoke dancing in front of my eyes,
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Khushi Batra
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

A touching poem loaded with emotions.. liked your creation that is so nicely penned

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Khushi Batra 10 December 2017

Thank you!

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Khushi B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Khushi Batra 10 December 2017

sure, thanks a ton

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2017

Khushi, such a good write...10+++

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Jacob 09 December 2017

I'm literally crying after reading this, the emotions are depicted really well, honestly

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