In grass the cows have not yet found
she nests, cross legged in a yogic pose
inhaling the exile circumstance imposed
exhaling the breadth of this bittersweet life
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Breathing is undeniably good, but this is better... This life, with its many sorrows and some joys, is so hard to encompass in a few lines, but here, as ever, you do it potently, movingly and (your word) tangibly - in the fullest emotional sense. You open other minds to yours and to the lessons/meaning of your experience Justine, and that, for me, is central to good writing. Words can be barriers or gateways. You always manage to make yours gateways, and, breathing on, you open a new gateway... xx
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Breathing is undeniably good, but this is better... This life, with its many sorrows and some joys, is so hard to encompass in a few lines, but here, as ever, you do it potently, movingly and (your word) tangibly - in the fullest emotional sense. You open other minds to yours and to the lessons/meaning of your experience Justine, and that, for me, is central to good writing. Words can be barriers or gateways. You always manage to make yours gateways, and, breathing on, you open a new gateway... xx