Saturday, October 29, 2011

Breath Of The Pipe Comments

Rating: 5.0

to sink to swim or to float,
on the leaves of spring,
life barrier to the heart,
a movement a stroke of the pen,
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Sharron Stephenson
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Eric Cockrell 06 November 2011

well written, sings off the page! intoxicates!

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Paul Brookes 06 November 2011

A very well written poem well done Paul

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 06 November 2011

I like this line...'mirrors of the world, glass of fear, ' This a good poem keep it up

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