Saturday, March 21, 2009

Breath Of Spring Air Comments

Rating: 4.1

Melting snow,
Cool breeze,
Crows diving in a row,
Return of the unfriendly bees,
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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2018

Such a beautiful description of springs that have changed life of everyone.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 18 October 2009

Brilliant piece. loved it. -

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Deepti Agarwal 15 September 2009

Beauty of Spring along with Growing old gracefully.. is all here.. with lovely mention of Queen Winter.... :)

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Marcella D 09 July 2009

this poem is beautiful, I just wish I didn't get sick during spring

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Springtime scented, colorful, fluent and sublime.10.

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Lynn Glover 25 May 2009

Sorry I didn't get to answer sooner. The poems I looked at and they are magnificently written. Well versed and have a very smooth flow. Good write on all three poems. Look up my O'er Yon Mountain and see what you think. Its from my book 'Poems from the Heart' published in 2008.

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Leslie Rodriguez 24 May 2009

Definitely me favorite so far from what Ive read...so far.. :) Awesome one.

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Jerry Abrahamson 21 May 2009

Great poem. I love it.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2009

Happy poem with an undertone of the perplexities of aging.

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heatherjean. cropper 20 May 2009

I love the spring and I love nature.. in fact, I was born in the spring.

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Angelic(Annie) Female 19 May 2009

Great poem describing nature and its beauty- makes one feel lost into a world of fantasies :)

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Monkey Bubbles 19 May 2009

this is really good, i like the images it gives me! thank you!

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Ency Bearis 18 May 2009

nice vivid write....wonderful....

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Shashendra Amalshan 16 May 2009

yes..very visual...great imagery...refreshing indeed..thank you for inviting me sir..

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Obinna Eruchie 16 May 2009

well you said it, spring came and there was happiness. thank you for this poem. it is wonderful.

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'Who can no longer run like a supersonic train' reading your poem. I enjoyed it.

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Erica German 09 May 2009

hello you asked me to read this poem. i really enjoyed it. thanks for recomending it to me. i think your poems are wonderful. it really speaks to people.

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Hanaya Sausan Kamil 08 May 2009

i love the opening phrase. its beautiful really. and your rhyme comes so naturally excellent work got so much lesson here. thx

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rago rago 08 May 2009

to read nature and related ones always enthuse and bring in happiness........fantastic write.

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Maya Graham 05 May 2009

Herbert, Way to go! If I never knew what Winter and Spring was you just hit the nail on the head..

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