Saturday, December 31, 2016

Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

The poet called fog is back

A psychopomp
Visits me
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Samantha Bolden
fog
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Terry Craddock 31 December 2016

'If you dare to go outside You're already lost' loved this conclusion after the wonderfully simple accurate lines 'Sight is very limited You don't see the hand in front of your eyes Your going to feel your way And the fog Devours your legs And then the whole body Shrouded by a coat of fog' brings back a few wonderfully dangerous mountain fog memories 10+

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