Breath Comments

Use of proper punctuation, particularly commas, makes the poem easy to read. Yet one would struggle to comprehend the meaning. Loved the last two lines more than the rest. Did you read my comment on your first poem, the one posted earlier to this one?

its hard to derive the concept of the poem which must have been in the poets mind at the time of writing it, and thats the beauty of it. A 10.

wonderful abstract poem, thank you for sharing..............10++++

the will of strength, confirms the survival, of the fighter. this is the hammer that stuck the nail. B. U. T. FULL