brown.., pouring your young tan breast into my mouth world...
your breasts are a full of red pleasure, lights my blood...
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I do enjoy reading your other poems, but I do think this one is a bit too explicit. It's very detailed in such a way that makes me want to read a different one. Honestly, you should stick to the other wonderful poems you write instead of coming up with these. I hope that you think twice about publishing these types of poems.
personally i like this poem, though it doesnt compare to you others, i just dont like how you used the word 'sexy' near the end of it. it just kind of sucked some of the beauty of this poem away.