Monday, January 18, 2010

Breast Cancer Comments

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Aunties very ill
Goes away
Has some tests
And is made to stay
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Katniss Everdeen
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Shekhar Joshi 19 January 2010

nice one....well written....tho u have a lot more to achieve and learn......but you are doing excellent........just keep up your level and work hard....... ;) u rock.....\m/..... ;)

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Rania Hammoud 18 January 2010

Hi Lili When i saw ur biography i felt i really wanna c wat a thirteen year old girl can write, i didn't expect this level....I had a look at some of ur poems they r really great and i was amazed by wat a girl of ur age can write.Honesty in this poem is outsanding, b4 i read that iy's ur aunt is who was sick i could figure it out by ur concern about this topic that someone much related to u is affected for u could express it Keep On writing.Well done lili PLus ur poem Candlelight is a v gd piece i liked it.

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