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The reality of the coldness of your ex as you see him in the distance and the cold reality of the situation! Superb write!

Going far from perception crossing the roadside field and bench in sadness amazes mind. Wisely penned poem is shared.10

A beautiful poem and nicely penned.... All the best. PC

It is beautiful blues poem having touching expression. The sadness of this poem is astutely depicted. Thank u dear Lipika for sharing this poem.10

no spark in eyes, no fire, good one