rain falling at my feet
swirling down a rusty drain
no need to run,
sick of the heat
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And as I finished readiing it, I exhaled a deep sigh! You've touched me with your words. The ability to make a stranger feel what you wrote is a gift my dear. Well done! ! Anna
i adore this piece.. especially this verse: ''' the beauty overwhlems me spread my arms to fly in my mind but so clearly i can see in the air i breathe to let it go with a sigh ''' so many times ive done the same.. thanks for sharing both of poetry & enjoying the beauty! !
Hi Leah, your words could hammer any hearts to a standstill.Nice writes.