Thursday, August 13, 2009

Breakthrough Comments

Rating: 3.5

rain falling at my feet
swirling down a rusty drain
no need to run,
sick of the heat
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Leah Ayliffe
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 August 2009

Hi Leah, your words could hammer any hearts to a standstill.Nice writes.

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Annabel Sheila 14 August 2009

And as I finished readiing it, I exhaled a deep sigh! You've touched me with your words. The ability to make a stranger feel what you wrote is a gift my dear. Well done! ! Anna

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HaZeM PaKKaR 13 August 2009

i adore this piece.. especially this verse: ''' the beauty overwhlems me spread my arms to fly in my mind but so clearly i can see in the air i breathe to let it go with a sigh ''' so many times ive done the same.. thanks for sharing both of poetry & enjoying the beauty! !

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Leah Ayliffe

Leah Ayliffe

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