Monday, May 9, 2011

Breakthrough Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart held captured by snow storms
Surrounded by icicles of different forms
A world of silence and covered by snow
Feelings of peace and serenity I can't let go
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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lost soul 09 May 2011

scholarly in every detail of writing. conveys so much emotion. the first paragraph is especially beautful. the poem truly is a breakthrough but so are all your poems 10+

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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