Breaking Up Comments

breaking up is so very hard to do especially when it's me and you we have tried to keep our love alive but! apparantly it has died.... it is heart breaking and very painful dear.. not to happen with anybody....10

a very moving poem...what an emotional hit this gives...this breaking up

I love this poem it reminded me of how my relationship ended and there was nothing that I could do.He told me that he didn't love me anymore and it was really hard. So I found that poetry was the only things that helped me through it all. Knowing that I wasn't the only one who was going through a hard time. So keep on writing your great at it and I'll continue to read your poems.

I think this is one of the best poems you have written so far Louis..I hate this feeling too leaves you so alone.. But you wrote this very very well.. Krista

You put your heart and soul writing this poem. i loved every bit of it. well done, sir 10+++