Breaking The Mould Comments

I like the rhythm of this poem. Why not retain the mould, unbroken and share more of your work?

Dear Malcolm, this is an inspiring poem with the realization of ups and downs in the life. Nice work. If you wish, you can read my poems for your comments. Thanks

journey of life with the ups and downs and the common wish to restart again...........put nicely in the poem

each and every stanza of this poem is mind blowing. e.g. In life and love there is no absolute Only trust and hope And every fear and every dream Moves up and down the slope i find 100% accuracy. a nice poem

I really like the sentiment behind this. Well written.