Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Breaking The Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

Seeing you lying there
The stillness of time washing away my memories
Those childhood days of missing you
The hours you worked to keep the family safe
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Susan Lacovara 04 June 2015

As Father's Day nears, celebrating the love and the legacy....Your poem rekindled the respect and relished memories I have of my own father. Once parted from his hand, my life seeks to honor him, everyday...in some small fashion. A wonderful write you have penned. PEACE

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 May 2015

An excellent tribute to a beloved father. Nicely crafted poem.

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