Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Breaking Point Comments

Rating: 3.9

I'm standing on the edge
toes hanging over the ledge
I'm wondering where the breaking point is
I'm standing on the edge thinking and eating some Ritz
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arianna loshnowsky
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Alexandria Pretty Girl 15 February 2012

i love most of her poems but she doesnt suit funny ones! ! !

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Adam Yaklin 20 April 2010

I love it! lol Just putting the word Ritz in there turns the whole mood around.

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Tyler Lee 06 August 2009

This poem is a masterpeice. It tells me How life is such a good thing and how good of an idea it is to just hang on instead of let it all go.(if your deppressed and wanna you kno...JUMP) Lol. but anyways nice job <3

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Meagan Slack 04 May 2009

I LOVE this! ! once again you floored me.. i love your style and i read your bio and we seem alot alike: D

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