Monday, August 13, 2007

Breaking Point Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your constant bitch’in was driving me insane
The sound of your voice always echoing in my brain
Nothing I did seem to every satisfied you
I had had my fill this time I was thru
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Sandra Martyres 01 April 2009

A gruesome act, but wonderfully told......Great poem Poison..10+

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Shane Clawson 10 October 2007

Great write! I feeli like shakin the lieing daughters of Rev Parris in The Crucible, the story of the salem witch trials. Keep writing!

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2007

I had my breaking point too, but done it only in my mind! I might say ' I can relate to it bro', top mark.

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Emancipation Planz 08 October 2007

Hmmmm... at 15 I held a knife to my father and then I left home....

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Barbara Haskell 05 October 2007

Whoa! ! That was....I'm speethat doesn't happen very often! chless...and

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Loreta Muskardin 08 September 2007

Dark dark imagination.

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