Friday, September 5, 2008

Breaking Me Down Comments

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These thoughts that tear into the depths of my mind.
Your words your face your smile holds me in a bind.
I find myself choking on my own words as they come out.
This feeling is so real, i have never had so much doubt.
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Chris O'Keeffe
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Dee Daffodil 05 September 2008

Hmmm...This sounds like a personal one. I sort of felt intrusive reading it..: -) Are you sure that this is a game...perhaps the other person has true feelings for you, yet there may be barriers in the way? Very thought provoking. You give the reader some of the story, but leave us wondering also. Well done! hugs, Dee

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