Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Breaking Free Comments

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The heat begins as the movement starts,
Two bodies, two hearts,
One place, one dream,
The sweat becoming a steady stream.
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Bethany Maxwell
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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 August 2008

the two souls when sanctified by the mingling of the two bodies against the sultry moment, when so luscious green unequalled, well penned, thanks for sharing

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Blessing Nanier 03 August 2008

this is a really really wonderful poem.i think it is an art

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Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
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