Monday, April 28, 2014

Breaking Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dawn gives birth to a new day:
Rushing in a flood of sun rays
Piercing morning mantel of dew,
Lifting new bride’s veil: for full view.
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Paul Sebastian
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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

A poem of hope at the dawn of a new day. A lovely poem.

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Heather Wilkins 04 October 2014

nice imagery with the breaking dawn waiting for a new day. full of hope for tomorrow

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Valsa George 29 April 2014

Great imagination..... Beautiful write! Really enjoyed this picturesque and pleasant day break! !

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Anand Brown 29 April 2014

Very fine poem with a natural rythmic quality to it. Good use of imagery which engages the reader in the pictuiresque setting of the poem. Take a bow Mr Sabastian

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 April 2014

very nice.loved the flow and rhyming.

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