Dawn gives birth to a new day:
Rushing in a flood of sun rays
Piercing morning mantel of dew,
Lifting new bride’s veil: for full view.
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nice imagery with the breaking dawn waiting for a new day. full of hope for tomorrow
Great imagination..... Beautiful write! Really enjoyed this picturesque and pleasant day break! !
Very fine poem with a natural rythmic quality to it. Good use of imagery which engages the reader in the pictuiresque setting of the poem. Take a bow Mr Sabastian
A poem of hope at the dawn of a new day. A lovely poem.