Saturday, June 30, 2012

Breaking Boundaries Comments

Rating: 4.6

Cheers of the same glass
Here we live in togetherness
In a classy wine glass or just a table cup
But, still in layers, we never mixed up
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Bound heart to heart Understanding, breaks boundaries Unison of different classes Cheer in the same glass Togetherness, we share life, Finally, be as one Just one A class in a glass Cheers! ! ..... great theme. I agree with this. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 04 September 2013

understand breaks boundaries togetherness we share life. good thoughts on life

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

Cheers! A class in a glass.. Cheers for the togetherness we share...beautiful poem. Each lines so well expressed. Loved it very much.. Thank you Soul for the inspiring comments for my poems...thanks a lot.

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Farah Ilyas 28 May 2013

Profound Riddle is solved by using simple entities like water, oil, surface, glass etc..wao from where such ideas come in your mind? i am still digging in these lines. Holding together after found a place to fit Swirling our souls, breaking all boundaries As whole applied to share a fumes of lavender Be in the bliss of red heart, crimson color The rule of oil and water now is gone For a mixture of love. i must say that you are not only a poetess but intellectual philosopher also..

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Frank James Davis 07 April 2013

An amazing poetic analogy! Brilliant, Soul!

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Tony Karas 12 December 2012

So incredibly moving! An excellent write.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 12 August 2012

You are right, there is no 2 person who would understand each other perfectly, because what you see in others, it is in you. If you do not understand them, they will not understand you either.

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Hamid Negah 29 July 2012

nice poem, One day we see the world with no Boundaries.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

We are all as one deep down - great poem.

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Black On Black Arts 20 July 2012

you are a one of a kind poet your words jump at the reader you are truly breaking boundaries

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Jinal Oswal 19 July 2012

I have no words Soul, this write is one of the best of your collection. How much do we long to see ourselves in others... One voice, one heart, one wish... No fight and all the things for everyone's right... The only mantra for this is understanding as you said... You understand me I understand you and then nothing can come between us... I thank the poemhunter team that they gave us this platform where we can share such beautiful thoughts with each other, where we come together irrespective of all the boundaries and beliefs we share our thoughts and make it one thought.... Thank you Soul for this beautiful, moving poem.. I loved it! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 13 July 2012

it is decided. all boundaries shall be broken on day. In ur line Bound heart to heart Understanding, breaks boundaries Unison of different classes Cheer in the same glass Togetherness, we share life, Finally, be as one Just one A class in a glass Cheers! ! Strong.

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Vipins Puthooran 13 July 2012

There'll be no war if we think that we all are humen! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'Tis a great poem, soul...... Love has no boundaries and throu' love we can cross any boundaries, which has created by man.....

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Nurain Ali-balogun 12 July 2012

I hope this poem goes a long way in breaking the boundaries we have set for one another, let not one be oil and one be water. I like the note you included...it made it a lot easier to understand and want to concur. Keep up the good work my friend, this is just brilliant.

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Finally, be as one Just one A class in a glass, , , , nice to feel and good to have such will.fine poem...10

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Rekha Mandagere 12 July 2012

Sparkling idea and the humble tone of the writer is really soothing. The imagery used here is fantastic.There is everything in togetherness.Lovely concept and I pray God for giving dignified life for all mankind!

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Shadow Girl 08 July 2012

This is beautiful - both the theme, the style and the whole concept. Totally loved this. Brilliant write -SG xo

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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2012

Each stanza deserving max. marks. If I simply say it is a brilliant and nice poem, you may not agree. But in fact, i like the analogy expressed through your pen. I feel your pen is a mighty sword which will never fail to defeat envy of all kinds. I do feel my self too poor to comment on any one's creation bxoz my heart and mind always tries to find nectar and a positive attitude of life. I enjoyed, b happy and smiley. Have a pleasant day.

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Ken E Hall 05 July 2012

Clever interpretation of life as two entwined together not mixed which in reality is common sense...enjoyed indeed +++10 regards

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Wahab Abdul 04 July 2012

As usual yr poem is an exquisite piece of poetry i always relish them..

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