Breaking Comments

Dear Sarkar, I find this a very powerful poem on a very powerful subject. Beautifully written. I do like the idea of breaking as the constant act of changing in life and life situations on earth. Very beautiful subject and good ending. Thanks for sharing. Sorry it is only now I am able to respond.

The poem of Breaking remind me to think about breaking the massive universe into a smaller particle until nothing else left to break! Perhaps, Emptiness is the consequence of breaking endlessly. Thank you for sharing. Cheers.

For ever breaking; ..............i suggest: Forever i did NOT dislike the poem, but my mind does not concern itself with such things, and i won't claim to understand all this breaking etc. etc. Ragnish refers to this poem as Highly philosophical musings. perhaps that is a good 'easy' description of it? i think i'm more down to earth****. thanks for sharing. **** THIS IS not EXACTLY WHAT I MEAN BY down to earth: from online: The definition of down to earth is someone or something that is free of pretension and doesn't put on airs, but who is instead simple and straight-forward. An example of down to earth is a person who buys a nice cozy farmhouse instead of a giant mansion. Let's just say i don't philosophize. i eat, drink, and sleep. bri :)

Superb poem written here. Simply wonderful.

i'm not quite done reading this, but i have to go now. i plan to return another day, even though i feel i'm breaking down......................completely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! now my parts are flowing over the floor, towards the door. bri :)

Very thought provoking I Like

Such an amazing work! A big 10! Thanks,

Write comment. Wow! A great science fiction and philosophical write. Thanks

This is the process how this universe has come into existence. Breaking and making is the process too with human emotions. with sweet wordplay you have given a true color to the reality. Thanks for sharing.10+++

Breaking is going on either in covert or in overt is true as death is.Dear Sankar, you have penned in touchingly and nicely. It is your pen I like to open here... Breaking is the cadence of universe Mentally or physically Externally and internally Covertly or overtly All is through breaking, .. thanks a lot.10

The poem is clear on one thing- the making and breaking is an integral part of the creation at personal and universal level. Highly philosophical musings amazingly presented. Thanks. All is breaking into atoms and molecules Beyond which we are nothing but breaking Breaking is the source of creation