Saturday, April 11, 2009

Breakfast Time In A Busy House Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a small kitchen,
The 5 of us struggle,
The toaster pops,
The milk spilt,
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Rosalita Fern
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Stephen Stirk 14 May 2009

That's one thing I miss. When you're going through it, it appears to be complete chaos and you can't wait to get out the house. When they've all grown up and fled the nest, it becomes a less stressful but more boring affair. I like this. Diversity makes a poem unique. This is diverse Much Enjoyed Steve (two eggs two sausage) Stirk

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Laurie Hill 13 April 2009

Really liked this, lovely imagery................

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