Breakdown Comments

And what is truth? We make our own truth in the end. I am who I say I am. I make myself who I say I am

very good way you present your idea..Great! ! !

superb lines written with gnawing realization of time running out.... helplessness and the decree of years tackled so well...almost scary loved reading it ***

A potent write-the pain shows through. One never knows until we experience it. This is profoundly disturbing

A very heartfelt write,

Very meaningful write - good one Sally.