Monday, May 24, 2010

Breakaway Comments

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I'm breaking down..
I'm giving up.
I'll break away from this someday.
This pain will stop,
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Marrissia Holliday
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Adam Reed 01 June 2010

dang...im sorry you had to come to understand what that pain is. its not fair. youve described it all beautifully though. very touching. good job

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Jesse Mejia 30 May 2010

you definitely have a great understanding of the loss, and the way you can describe it in such words it commendable. i'm definitely envious, good job

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