Friday, July 31, 2009

Break Up (After All...) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Criticize my smile it's fake.
My eyes tears out and now like a lake.
This is the effect of what you've made,
Since when my heart gets totally break.
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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

well expressed of emotion and crafted into poetic rendition...some words cannot comprehend like ' onlu '....but the intention is well defined....

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