Friday, May 11, 2007

Break Up Comments

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Time with you was worthwhile,
Happiness the virtue that dearly drives,
Let those moment wets your seething thirst,
Before it eventually becomes your dried past,
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Olabode Joseph Oluwatayo
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Raul Castelan 08 June 2007

This poem had class, and went well with the flow. You did a splendid job here.

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Aliyah Al-Sharji 24 May 2007

i just love it spiclly thiz part, , , My love-plant with each moment keep dying, Not enough water to have it growing!

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