Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Break-Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lost someone that I held so close to my heart
I can't believe that we broke apart
That person was my everything
But know my heart has a huge sting.
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MNSRAlyssa Bii
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Unnikrishnan E S 18 December 2016

Hi Alyssa, A great poem. Upto now, I was reading only the emotions and poesy in your poems. After reading this one, I just went back to them once again. The rhymes, rhythm, vocabulary, enriched narrative, everything fascinated me. Really good poem. I see a very talented poet here. Congratulations. Finding positive vibes here too- Even after a painful heartbreak, the poet is trying to build life back. Loved reading..10++

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