Saturday, July 18, 2009

Break Up Comments

Rating: 4.4

We've tried so hard to understand, but we can't.
There is nothing else left in our hand!
We werent meant to be
I tried my hard to be together
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Broken heart emo
COMMENTS
Heera 15 January 2018

Kamesh ,your writings are really awesome ....keep rocking

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Brian Skyers 31 December 2011

I am sorry stop thi nonsence...I tried hard to be together, is only you trying

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Oritseweyinmi Ejeye 07 December 2011

Its a wonderful poem, you know what am going right now

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Shoush Sa 14 October 2011

It's Just like what happend with me I'm so realeted to this poem I wish u write a poem about having a crush bcoz it's what I'm feeling right now

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Shoush Sa 14 October 2011

It's Just like what happend with me I'm so realeted to this poem I wish u write a poem about having a crush bcoz it's what I'm feeling right now

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Kyle Youngblood 09 July 2011

For a second there I thought you took the first line of 'All We Know' by Paramore. Check the song the first line is the first lyric. Lol. A sad, but true poem...

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Robin Machorro 13 August 2010

i can relate to this with an ex of mine it hurts so much how something so perfect can end up broken before you even know it

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Ethan Aparicio (2014) 10 June 2010

Pretty Damn Good........

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Rishin Mathers 22 January 2010

im juz outta break up, , , really touchin

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Afzal Shauq 31 July 2009

But it looks like there is no other way! ! Our paths are different And they can never meet again One thing i would like to say I loved u.... roamntic enough..rich idea, poetic flow and the way you done is perfect.. really enjoyed it and meaningful and thoughtful piece is this...well done 10/10

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Luwi Habte 27 July 2009

story of alot of souls nice and so great poem appriciated job Luwi

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Lynn Glover 24 July 2009

A very sad, sad poem. Breaking up is always hard on some one. I think you expressed the feelings we all have had during a break up. Brings back memories and that is a credit to good writing. A very good poem. Your Friend Lynn

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beautiful. expressionful. truthful. meaningful. let's just say it's 'ful' of alot of things. lol. it's really good! ! ! i liked alot! ! ! !

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~ Jon London ~ 22 July 2009

A very well expressed poem of the heart......touching to read and I'm sure many will relate to this wonderful share of your heart....well penned

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Mary Joy Lumanog 22 July 2009

nice poem..came from the heart..your a good emo! go emo! ! ! ! :)

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Sushmita Moktan 20 July 2009

hi...nice poem...keep it up

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Darkness Everywhere 20 July 2009

lots of emotion look all your poems amazing keep it up 10+++

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rago rago 20 July 2009

let the warm spread and warm keep you up ..............

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Zeinab Sherif 19 July 2009

that was great friend, keep it up

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Karanvir Kataria 18 July 2009

hey little angel very well writen keep on writing n it cant be fiction as ur last one'emo kid' keep on writing 10+

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