Saturday, July 28, 2012

Break Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gave you all I have
What do I have?
My heart, a virgin heart
The only thing I can give
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Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour
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Oduro Bright Amoh 22 April 2015

This poem does seem like it came straight out of the virgin heart that was broken. Great work

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Hunter Hunters 05 August 2016

oduro, I appreciate your comment, thanks a lot.

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Kelvin Owusu 09 September 2012

this is nice very well written

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Eindaray Kyaw 26 August 2012

A great strike.....A usual problem of the ones who tastes love, you are good at your job.Thank you!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2012

Writing poetry with the experiences of one's life touches many hearts. Thanks for sharing this one with us. A nice piece of work; but, THERE ARE HEART BREAKERS EVERYWHERE. E.K.L.

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