Break The Fall Comments

Adding this to my favourites. Tiger is right, it is very touching. I love it. Favourite line: So break the fall with the truth I think that in just one line you carried so much power and honesty. Excellent!

This is a very touching poem soren. My favorite line: When we fall from our trees, we may feel like we're rotten; your grief I can clearly see, but I remind you you're not forgotten This and the closing lines are beautiful. The first line shows your friend that even though she may feel abandoned shes not and the closing lines sum u nicely how we're still young and have a ways to go before we can even think about throwing in the towel. Great job!