Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Break Some More Comments

Rating: 4.5

broken pieces
fall to the floor
shatter everywhere
and break some more
...
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Carrie Sprouse
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Ben Gieske 17 January 2009

Very nicely written. Everything is there to tell the story from beginning to end. The rhythm of the reading is smooth and glides along.

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Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

A great poem again a wonderfull job

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Vilma Xelin 20 August 2008

Again, you are a hopefull person.... you are broken, and still you are thinking on recovery... you are hurt but you can think even in revenge, in hate... I admire you!

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Carrie Sprouse

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