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your closing lines are wonderful. nice message in your poem. thanks for sharing.

‘Making is humdrum // A clichéd pursuit of // An obsessive fat husband // Of multiparous woman.’ Oblique message for uncontrolled fertilization especially for 3rd world. Excellent poem. PO PO

beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovely writing..

beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovely writing..

beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovley writing..

well, this is nice poem well done poet nice and fine to read luwi

'Thro’ braking All civilization saw Dawn and are hallowed, Gives hope for jilted Lovers to start anew.' Excellent poem with beautiful idea.